The secret of greatness is to know when you should risk the wrath of god.
The Unspoken Name,
A.K. Larkwood
At 14 years old, Csorwe was the chosen bride of the Unspoken One, and had lived her life in preparation for sacrificing herself to her religion’s god. As she walks into the tunnels that lead to the shrine, a wizard named Belthandros Sethennai asks her to run away with him and be his apprentice as he seeks to regain control of his home. Csorwe chooses life, and runs away with him, and as she grows up he trains her to be his right hand, and tasks her with finding a magical relic that will help secure his power. As she embarks on this quest, she meets people who force her to examine what she actually wants for herself.
I had a bit of a rough start with this one—the first few chapters were really intriguing, but there’s a time jump that skips over a lot of Csorwe’s training and sends her directly on a mission that was not all that interesting. This section dragged some, but I was still into the fantasy atmosphere of it all and I was having a good time. After this section, there is yet another time jump, which made the novel seem rather disconnected up to this point—like a collection of stories as opposed to one novel. However, after this point I really started enjoying it so much more! The action picks up and our cast of characters grows to include many interesting characters, solving the central problem with this book: Csorwe, for most of the book, is boring.
The reason for this, of course, is that for the first 24 years of her life, Csorwe dedicates herself entirely to others and their desires. She’s raised to die for the Unspoken One, and then she takes that loyalty and places it onto Sethennai. After her decision to live, every choice she makes is for him, never for herself, and all she wants throughout is his approval. This is completely understandable for her character, but doesn’t really make for an interesting main character. Fortunately, she definitely undergoes some development in this area, and it’s incredibly satisfying when she starts questioning what she wants for herself. By the end of the book, Csorwe had really grown on me.
This does not sound like a four star review so far but I promise I really liked this book!
The other characters were really great. Shuthmilli is an interesting parallel to Csorwe; she was also raised to give up her life for her god. She’s powerful with magic, is really interested in her studies, and funny. I loved following her on her journey with Csorwe, and their romance was pretty sweet. Oranna is a powerful necromancer and her motivations and abilities made for a complex antagonist. My favorite character was Tal Charossa; he’s an asshole who doesn’t want people to know he cares about things and also really funny. I enjoyed his antagonistic relationship with Csorwe. They absolutely despise each other but for a good portion of the book, are the closest either of them has to a friend, and I loved the dynamic.
The world-building was really well done. The world consists of several different worlds, connected to each other by a series of gates that can be traveled through via airship. Several of them are visited throughout the course of the novel—dead worlds, dying worlds, as well as thriving worlds. Each world has a different god that is worshipped, with its own mythology and history, and the gods are the sources of magic. I was really interested in all of this, and the fact that there were different types of magic. There’s also a world of giant snakes!
I had a lot of fun reading this, despite it’s problems. Maybe it’s because I was just really in the mood for fantasy, but I think the world, the characters and the second half of the book really make up for the problems I had. It’s also really funny, especially during Tal’s POV chapters. I look forward to reading the next one!